Hmm. This is an interesting piece. At first I didn’t like the rhyme scheme, but when I reread the poem, I like it much better. I like the sentiment of the last stanza, but I feel like the stanza itself isn’t as strong or as well written as the others. I got the feeling that the ending was just slapped together while the rest of the poem was carefully constructed. To me, it feels too simple, too bland to belong with the rest of the poem. Keep up the good work!