Wow this story is really good. I enjoyed it =)
Update soon I can't wait to see what happens next!!

~Lots of Love and Pain Mezo~

oh COOLIO.

im definitely gonna keep tabs on this story!

good writing... could use a little bit of work in the editing department... (Lilith had just come from her friends house and)((friends))

but as a first draft really well written. good job!!

A bit diturbing lol , i think i get the jist but you l