Ooh, I love it, its so prettiful! I love the descriptions you have used. Daydreaming is fun.

Still luv'in it. Keep up the good work.

Derrick.

Woah! Your last two lines gave me chills! This is so beautiful, it makes me want to cry, or fly, or fall in love. Not many things can make me do that. Awesome job!

i read this all sing songy in my head. i assume that this is what you intended. if it is, that is good. if it isn't, then... well, i still like it, and will continue reading it in a sing songy manner, thank you very much.

kudos. =)

i would like to visit this dream :) it sounds nice...lots better than where i am lol. this flows really nice and has lots of great imagary, i liked it a lot, keep it up!

So sweet and simple. Very nice. :)

LXF

Very dreamy, and I love it!