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| Jesse the Storyteller 2008-08-16 ch 1,   | This is good. Really good. I'm impressed since it was so short. The description of his blood running down his hands was excellent - very descriptive! The emotions and their relationship are very well-played as well. Especially in the way that she calls him a monster right when her own personality becomes monstrous. It's a very nice twist, nice turn of events. I wish this were longer... it's incredibly intriguing and really good... ahg! -Jesse Attack of the review marathon! (link in my profile!) |
| cassandra12271 2007-03-08 ch 1, | How sad! what a tragedy. I like it! |