This is good. Really good. I'm impressed since it was so short. The description of his blood running down his hands was excellent - very descriptive!

The emotions and their relationship are very well-played as well. Especially in the way that she calls him a monster right when her own personality becomes monstrous. It's a very nice twist, nice turn of events. I wish this were longer... it's incredibly intriguing and really good... ahg!

-Jesse
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How sad! what a tragedy. I like it!