 HauntedMisery 2006-12-04 . chapter 1Oh wow...this poem is short but so beautifully crafted...I absolutely love this...wonderful job and thank you for the reviews ^_^ |
 Michael's Divinity 2006-11-27 . chapter 1I loved it. You're great at this. Keep writing. |
 PocoSnow15 2006-11-27 . chapter 1Wow! That was really pretty! I love poetry with stars in it, they're so beautiful. I thought your rhyming was really awesome, too.
I can't thank you enough for your reviews, they really made my day. Feel free to use my haiku for your boyfriend if you want it; I don't mind.
Keep writing! |
 trash can art 2006-11-25 . chapter 1yum! quite catchy. i very much approve.
i love the topics of stars and divine and the like. they always leave me in a very dazed silence. the thoughtful kind, not the loony kind.
or maybe the loony kind, too. yes, probably the loony kind as well. |
 Counting Petals 2006-11-25 . chapter 1Short, but there's a lot of imagery in it. Nicely done! |
 All Alone With Her Thoughts 2006-11-24 . chapter 1I like it a lot. The meter is a little off, so I would suggest changing the lines: "That glitter and shine" to just "Gliter and shine" and "Beauty divine" to "Are beauty divine." Also...I think I would change the last line, it's a little off, and doesn't really make sense.
Thanks for the review!
Rowan. |
 tesa131313 2006-11-24 . chapter 1I like this poem. The beginning is really nice!
ps thanks for the review! |
 lullabys and fireflies 2006-11-23 . chapter 1Hey, I really enjoyed that. It was beautiful, great job!
~Star |
 Alena D'Etoiles 2006-11-23 . chapter 1Ergh. Too many syllables on that last line. Oh well. I really did struggle with it, and it turned out the best is was ever going to. I'll shut up, cuz I'm not making any sense at all. |