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| simpleplan13 2007-01-17 ch 1,  | abusethis is interesting... I like it a lot.. well done |
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseVery lovely. I like the imagry of the bird's eyes. Keep writing. |
| like a lover 2006-12-14 ch 1, | abuseit's beautiful. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseOh, this is so haunting. So pretty and simple, but deep and amazing. Beautiful work. Keep writing! :) |
| beauty and the breakdown 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abusepretty choice of words: 'hued', 'such a long long time'. it's such heartache condensed. love. |
| cocaine and cherries 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abusei love the image of holding a bird in your hands. birds represent freedom. holding it represents caging. freedom caged. hm. i love how you make me think. |
| a lonely september 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abusei can tell its personal. it seems really deep, and you can just tell there is so much more to it than what the words say. its a read-between-the-lines thing. but it's gorgeous. |
| Midnight In Eden 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abuseI don't like the way the last line reads, with the two ta word before lies. Apart from that the rest of it is quite intriguing, gets a reader interested. .:midnight:. |
| And Your Little Dog Too 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abusemost poems are personal lol, i liked it though though it was hard to understand because doi it was personal but it had some nice imagery with the mocking bird or whatever lol |
| poetic abortion 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI love this. It is short and crisp and, oh, you hurt my heart beautifully. ♥ So; the ending is astounding and I love the image of a mockingbird, it just adds this abstract appeal to it and is oh so lovely with the image of "in your hands/locked for such a long long time". The poor thing. Lovely, so lovely. ♥ - Noelle |
| Aquafied 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuselife is personal |
| teh tarik 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abusegods i love short poems especially this one cause every line hits you hard and every word is just where it should be. lovely piece. |
| circus elastic 2006-11-24 ch 1, | abuseit's pretty. I love poems like this - they're so short, but so full of meaning, be it personal, or for everyone. i love it. |