|Reviews for starfish resemblances|
| simpleplan13 1/17/07 . chapter 1
this is interesting... I like it a lot.. well done
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 12/16/06 . chapter 1
Very lovely. I like the imagry of the bird's eyes. Keep writing.
| like a lover 12/14/06 . chapter 1
| no.peace.los.angeles 12/7/06 . chapter 1
Oh, this is so haunting. So pretty and simple, but deep and amazing. Beautiful work. Keep writing! :)
| beauty and the breakdown 12/1/06 . chapter 1
pretty choice of words: 'hued', 'such a long long time'. it's such heartache condensed. love.
| i'll ask the stars above 11/30/06 . chapter 1
i love the image of holding a bird in your hands. birds represent freedom. holding it represents caging. freedom caged. hm. i love how you make me think.
| a lonely september 11/27/06 . chapter 1
i can tell its personal. it seems really deep, and you can just tell there is so much more to it than what the words say. its a read-between-the-lines thing. but it's gorgeous.
| Midnight In Eden 11/27/06 . chapter 1
I don't like the way the last line reads, with the two ta word before lies.
Apart from that the rest of it is quite intriguing, gets a reader interested.
| And Your Little Dog Too 11/26/06 . chapter 1
most poems are personal lol, i liked it though though it was hard to understand because doi it was personal but it had some nice imagery with the mocking bird or whatever lol
| poetic abortion 11/26/06 . chapter 1
I love this.
It is short and crisp and, oh, you hurt my heart beautifully.
So; the ending is astounding and I love the image of a mockingbird, it just adds this abstract appeal to it and is oh so lovely with the image of "in your hands/locked for such a long long time".
The poor thing.
Lovely, so lovely.
| Aquafied 11/26/06 . chapter 1
life is personal
| teh tarik 11/26/06 . chapter 1
gods i love short poems especially this one cause every line hits you hard and every word is just where it should be. lovely piece.
| circus elastic 11/24/06 . chapter 1
it's pretty. I love poems like this - they're so short, but so full of meaning, be it personal, or for everyone. i love it.