 simpleplan13 2007-01-17 . chapter 1this is interesting... I like it a lot.. well done |
 X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-12-16 . chapter 1Very lovely. I like the imagry of the bird's eyes. Keep writing. |
 like a lover 2006-12-14 . chapter 1it's beautiful. |
 no.peace.los.angeles 2006-12-07 . chapter 1Oh, this is so haunting. So pretty and simple, but deep and amazing. Beautiful work. Keep writing! :) |
 beauty and the breakdown 2006-12-01 . chapter 1pretty choice of words: 'hued', 'such a long long time'. it's such heartache condensed. love. |
 i'll ask the stars above 2006-11-30 . chapter 1i love the image of holding a bird in your hands. birds represent freedom. holding it represents caging. freedom caged. hm. i love how you make me think. |
 a lonely september 2006-11-27 . chapter 1i can tell its personal. it seems really deep, and you can just tell there is so much more to it than what the words say. its a read-between-the-lines thing. but it's gorgeous. |
 Midnight In Eden 2006-11-27 . chapter 1I don't like the way the last line reads, with the two ta word before lies.
Apart from that the rest of it is quite intriguing, gets a reader interested.
.:midnight:. |
 And Your Little Dog Too 2006-11-26 . chapter 1most poems are personal lol, i liked it though though it was hard to understand because doi it was personal but it had some nice imagery with the mocking bird or whatever lol |
 poetic abortion 2006-11-26 . chapter 1I love this.
It is short and crisp and, oh, you hurt my heart beautifully. ♥
So; the ending is astounding and I love the image of a mockingbird, it just adds this abstract appeal to it and is oh so lovely with the image of "in your hands/locked for such a long long time".
The poor thing.
Lovely, so lovely. ♥
- Noelle |
 Aquafied 2006-11-26 . chapter 1life is personal |
 teh tarik 2006-11-26 . chapter 1gods i love short poems especially this one cause every line hits you hard and every word is just where it should be. lovely piece. |
 circus elastic 2006-11-24 . chapter 1it's pretty. I love poems like this - they're so short, but so full of meaning, be it personal, or for everyone. i love it. |