this is interesting... I like it a lot.. well done

Very lovely. I like the imagry of the bird's eyes. Keep writing.

it's beautiful.

Oh, this is so haunting. So pretty and simple, but deep and amazing. Beautiful work. Keep writing! :)

pretty choice of words: 'hued', 'such a long long time'. it's such heartache condensed. love.

i love the image of holding a bird in your hands. birds represent freedom. holding it represents caging. freedom caged. hm. i love how you make me think.

i can tell its personal. it seems really deep, and you can just tell there is so much more to it than what the words say. its a read-between-the-lines thing. but it's gorgeous.

I don't like the way the last line reads, with the two ta word before lies.

Apart from that the rest of it is quite intriguing, gets a reader interested.

.:midnight:.

most poems are personal lol, i liked it though though it was hard to understand because doi it was personal but it had some nice imagery with the mocking bird or whatever lol

I love this.

It is short and crisp and, oh, you hurt my heart beautifully. ♥

So; the ending is astounding and I love the image of a mockingbird, it just adds this abstract appeal to it and is oh so lovely with the image of "in your hands/locked for such a long long time".

The poor thing.

Lovely, so lovely. ♥

- Noelle

life is personal

gods i love short poems especially this one cause every line hits you hard and every word is just where it should be. lovely piece.

it's pretty. I love poems like this - they're so short, but so full of meaning, be it personal, or for everyone. i love it.