Very thoughtful and meaningful. The last stanza made a powerful impact. Keep up the great work! =] -Sara

The main idea is really good and strong... It's kind of choppy and straight-forward... pretty catchy style.

-stixerz-

hey Lizzy that's really sad. I know the feeling although it seems so much more full(?) in this poem. it feels more like death than goodbye.
~ Ex- The shadow in the mirror (aka Rebs)

i like the flow of this piece, very well written!

keep writing

Ditto.. its how I feel. It makes me sad.

This is good. It flows well too. keep up the good work.

reminds me of my boyfriend and i...well ex now...good job, i liked it a lot. it was well written and flowed nicely :) keep it up.

~forgottenxxfreak