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| poemkitten7 2007-06-15 ch 1,  | abuseVery thoughtful and meaningful. The last stanza made a powerful impact. Keep up the great work! =] -Sara |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseThe main idea is really good and strong... It's kind of choppy and straight-forward... pretty catchy style. -stixerz- |
| Complications 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abusehey Lizzy that's really sad. I know the feeling although it seems so much more full(?) in this poem. it feels more like death than goodbye. ~ Ex- The shadow in the mirror (aka Rebs) |
| mizu no kokoro 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abusei like the flow of this piece, very well written! keep writing |
| not-really-susan 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abuseDitto.. its how I feel. It makes me sad. |
| CrazyTurtles 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is good. It flows well too. keep up the good work. |
| forgottenxxfreak 2006-11-23 ch 1, | abusereminds me of my boyfriend and i...well ex now...good job, i liked it a lot. it was well written and flowed nicely :) keep it up. ~forgottenxxfreak |