Very descriptive and emotional. I've had several students who've found cutting a relief. I hope you're not like them. From my limited experience, it doesn't work. Instead, it only reminds them they're still alive. Oh well, it's been around for thousands of years. Who am I to change it?

I'm confused by your format. Very interesting. I'm not saying there's anything wrong, just that it's unusual. That's the great thing about poetry, unless you're a critic, there's no rules! Write on!

i really like it,
but i'm just not sure if the parenthesis were really neccessary?
anyway, it's very good.

Gah. This is raw. Very. Pretty though.

Wow, I love the darkness and raw emotion of this; I love the line "her ink has been her own blood before, but never like this." Great job!

okay... I LOVE YOUR POETRY.

Pure. Raw. EMOtion.

Mwahahahaha.

I hate to say it...but... some one crazier than I am!

(sorry.)

:D

Hmm, not my favorite piece. It's nice, but it doesn't really say anything to me. Keep writing! :)

this was pain and panic and caustrophobia (trapped in coffins, buried alive, and all we can ask is who will save her now?)drop your shovels to the ground, secretly she wanted this all along (because that's how it felt), but it just may be that i'm overlaying my life and Little Miss's.

Again...another gorgeous piece...I love your darker pieces...they are all so tragically beautiful and I love the format...excellent work

frustration is the perfect title for this poem. because i understand this feeling, i understand it too much and you wrote it down so perfectly, so beautifully, when it reality, this isn't beautiful. it's just painful. but your ability to make it this beautiful. it's so awful to loose the release of bleeding yourself away & when it happens... 'Little Miss doesn’t know what to do and the walls she’s enclosed in only echo her screams back (isn’t there anyone to hear her?).' that line is perfect...

Oh wow, I can relate in some unknown way. I like this!

I enjoyed this piece. It has some of your old intensity that I feel some of your recent works have been lacking. The last line had that spark especially; it was a perfect conclusion. Keep up the good work!

I love your poertry sweety, I really do, and I know how awful I am for not reviewing and, yeah, I'm an awful person but can you love me despite it? (Alright, its late and my brain is running on odd and I'm infatuated with you at this point because, damn, I read this and it was beyond pretty and, um, so was all the rest of your poetry and, damn, I'm starting to run out of words.) :O

"Her ink has been her own blood" - I love the symbolic meaning of this-that you write with your blood-but I also am freakishly haunted by the image that entails to it and, damnit, you makes self-hate pretty when it really shouldn't because it is ugly and horrid and I know because I am self hate in a tiny bottle of Ohh-and-Ahh; I love you for that line, seriously.

Oh; this is so pretty. So pretty and haunting and eloquent, I love you and your poetry and, oh. How can you hurt me? ;(

- Noelle

hhm. im finding your style changes very interesting atm.

very real piece here, you have some intersting use of brackets in this & it all works well. as ever. ~Bex xx

great poem
im done with this

i like the first line the most! Nice job