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Star Anise 2008-11-18 ch 9,	Hey, are you gonna update this any time soon? This was the very first mythological fanfic that I've ever read and it's my fave pairing as well as wonderfully written - your rendition of Hades is beautifully unusual! I'd really like to read the rest, so please update soon!
Isabella22 2008-08-04 ch 9,	Update ASAP. I hope there's more physical tension soon! It's always so much fun to read! Great story. I can't wait for the next chapter :D
crecentmoon89 2008-06-20 ch 9,	i love this story and you must continue it soon!
Michael's Divinity 2008-01-29 ch 9,	Another magnificent chapter, though I am saddened by the fact there isn't anymore. But that will pass I should be talking about this chapter. So here it is: there are many things I liked about it, for instance the part were Persephone cracked a joke, and that Hades smiling the love and happiness she brings him. Although I have a feeling that this story has a tragic ending. Until the next chapter, love.
Michael's Divinity 2008-01-15 ch 8,	That was a delightful chapter and I like what Hecate is doing for Persephone teaching her magic to defend herself. I can't wait to see more of this... it's so beautifully done, though I know little to nothing about mythology, but anyway it still great. It's wellwritten, well paced, and overall fantastic. I hope this story blows people's mind when it's finished. Until the next chapter I take my leave of you, lady.
Michael's Divinity 2007-09-21 ch 7,	Wow, that was... another great chapter and the she treats him, I don't blame her... but, she could at least eat something. Anyway! It's great and your great, keep up the damn good work, you hear me? ~Derrick~
luneress 2007-09-16 ch 9,	wow. this story is truely wonderfully amazing. i love the way you've captured the characters. very excellent. i love the whole story. i can't wait to you write more.
nimblnymph 2007-09-16 ch 9,	Nice! I'm really feeling bad for Hades now. Strange... shouldn't I be feeling bad for the kidnapped girl? Eh, whatever! I really don't have anything constructive to say here. You know I think this story is coming along fantastically. You're starting to craft your own spin on the myth, which is very nice. Oh, here's something! In case I never said it, I'm loving the development of the secondary characters, like Thanatos and the Crone. It's a very nice thing to see you include other characters besides the two main ones into the story line. So... I've gotta wait until next Thursday for an update. Okay. I can do that.
soojinyeh 2007-09-14 ch 1,	Oh the joy of greek mythology. or is it Roman? whatever. Love it. Review me please.
TwinSaru 2007-09-07 ch 9,	I'm soo happy to see that you've updated!! Well, it seems like Hades is becoming a bit dull when it comes to persepone, but that's to be expected when one's head over heels. however, what really interests me is the crone and eris. what do you have them plotting?? their wavering loyalties and their taste for mischief makes me feel a little bad for hades since i'm sure he's got a lot of...suffering to do before finally attaining persephone. when are the olympians going to raise hell?? when is persephone going to finally eat something??!
Orochi warrior x 2007-09-07 ch 9,	great discriptions, good foreshadowing, cant wait till next chapter.
TwinSaru 2007-08-27 ch 8,	This chapter was really well written. I think it was worth the wait and that you are doing a fantastic job in character development, especially in the 180 that persephone just made. I detest the whiny type female roles and this is so much better. I think you're making a wonderful myth!
Vivian J. Edwards 2007-08-11 ch 8,	I just wandered across this story the other night, & I am VERY impressed. You seem to have a thorough grasp of the classic, & do it justice with your extremely well-written interpretation. I do hope you'll update soon!
cryingelf 2007-08-03 ch 8,	hm. Persephone seems a bit too petulant in this chapter. Keep updating
nimblnymph 2007-08-03 ch 8,	This was such a pivotal chapter here! Hecate... nice touch! Makes me wonder what exactly that cron'es got up her sleeve. I feel so incredibly sorry for Hades right now, but at the same time I don't blame Persephone for being angry. sighs Men... I swear to God! What was really fantastic about this chapter was the shifting in the story line it created. We're seeing Persephone change, hardening up from being just a sweet, somewhat temperamental girl to a more mature you woman. The plot shift as well between their dynamic, becoming just a little less hostile as it were, is fantastic as well. Very good work from you, as always!

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