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| neongoldtooth 2008-01-30 ch 11,  | abusei liked it. whoo! come on sequel! |
| nomy 2007-12-31 ch 11, | abusedo a sequel!!i just lovw the outline the story..you even can make ferren in love with other person and i still like the sequel and the story..i just love how you can make a chat conversation and still make me wanted to read your story..coz i hate chat type story coz its jus make my eye hurt as to read too fast..hahaha..but do a sequel!! |
| Dark-White-Tiger 2007-04-26 ch 11, | abuseThe...end? =O Noo! I was just getting into it! -prods you with a pointy stick- You should write a sequel right this minute. -nodnod- Wow, it was such an abrupt ending. o.o;; |
| Dark-White-Tiger 2007-04-26 ch 5, | abuseHmm. I'm kinda torn between the online and real life thing now. xD The MSN chatting is good, but setting it in real life is needed to describe the characters. -goes off to read the rest of the chapters- |
| Last.Forgotten.Faerie14 2007-02-07 ch 8, | abuseI like this chapter thing, continue, continue. i can't wait for the next, now I'm going to check other randomness categories. oh and I didn't feel like changing my penname I'm going to keep it like this for a while. YAY! (no not really, saying that with no enthusiasm) >, |
| Last.Forgotten.Faerie14 2007-01-27 ch 7, | abuseYes, i love it please continue. I must say I love Feren, he always makes me laugh. Anyways I might my username thing, so if the next review is like Neon something or then that's really me Dark1Cloud3Angel, I might change it. Just making you aware...please continue >, |
| The.Human.Condition 2007-01-27 ch 7, | abuse*giggle* *sing-song voice* Perry's gonna get it. hehehe |
| Last.Forgotten.Faerie14 2007-01-13 ch 6, | abusesorry I haven't been on fiction press for a while >_< I love the it. It's so fuuny and good description of characters to get like a feel for what they look like and all, but I do agree I like online chatting...Please update soon! |
| The.Human.Condition 2007-01-06 ch 5, | abuseTo be honest, it kind of freaked me out when I saw it wasn't chatting. I was all "what the crap, is it the wrong story...?" I think Perry went a bit overboard getting so ** at Feren like that..I mean, you wouldn't think it possible being that Feren's so smexy... |
| The.Human.Condition 2007-01-04 ch 4, | abusehehe. Oh my god, I LOVE your story! it may have been on a whim (right?) but it was a very good whim. Keep it up! :) |
| Last.Forgotten.Faerie14 2006-12-29 ch 4, | abuseAnother great chapter, love love love it, can't wait for ya to update again. It's getting more humerous in each chapter anyways, g2g, keep on writing this! |
| Adorian 2006-12-16 ch 3, | abuseGood idea! This story is really coming together. Keep up the writing! |
| Last.Forgotten.Faerie14 2006-12-11 ch 3, | abuseI'm so happy you updated the story. It's really good I find it very funny (like I said in the other review), can't wait for ya to update again! Amazingly good, Continue:-) |
| Adorian 2006-12-04 ch 2, | abuseOkay, I can definatly see humor in this now. You just had me confused with the killing part at the end. I'm definatly liking where this story is going. Keep it up! |
| Last.Forgotten.Faerie14 2006-12-03 ch 2, | abuseI loved it, I thought it was good and very humerous, since I've been on this is the first IM type conversation story. I say continue, it was great can't wait for more and update soon! |