Reviews for The Anatomy of the Psyche

Reviews For: The Anatomy of the Psyche

Abdul Alhazred - John Brewe... 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abuseYar! Ack! That was very full circly and very concise... Gah! My exclamations say that this is a favorite. awesome poem
Aleksy Lorraine 2007-10-18 ch 1,	abuseHot damn. Short, sweet(...?), and crystal clear. I don't mean that the subject was transparent, I mean that you described everything really simply which is nice. Plus it's a really neat concept. I could imagine all of that seeping and springing. I'd like to note that adding a color into the mix was a smart move. Colors can set a mood and tone instantaneously, and in this case it opened a floodgate in my mind. I LUV YOU! Ahem. I mean, good job! I'd be thrilled to read more poetry like this. Hint hint...
The Business of Misery 2007-07-17 ch 1,	abuseVery nice, in a sort of creepy way. Hard to explain, but so is death, I guess. You're a very talented poet.
Cirien Phoenix 2007-07-07 ch 1,	abuseAlthough I might be wrong, my impression of the poem is this: Putting death in a box and waiting for it to spring means that death would happen at random, rather than having the effects of aging slowly take hold of a person. The fact that it's in an open tomb seeping slowly may mean that instead it does take hold of a person little by little and shows it's effects and grasp as time passes. Hope I got that right, haha! Either way, good for a short little piece. ~Cirien Phoenix P.S. Thanks for the review on "Touch Assignment." When I'm back to the computer I normally use I should have an update for that in the next week or two. Glad to see you're really enjoying it. While I didn't intend for it to be overly reminiscient of Kingdom Hospital, I can definitely see why you feel that way. Also, I'm happy to see I'm playing into multiple fears of your's! Hope you continue to enjoy the story as I update more!
Ammom 2007-05-07 ch 1,	abuseOoh, I liked that! Short, simple, but nicely put together. Great work.
Remedy For Love 2007-05-05 ch 1,	abuseAwesome. I like the comparison of death and spring. Even though they're total opposites. They mesh quite well. Great job. ^^
Mind.of.Insanity 2007-04-03 ch 1,	abuseo I like it...
Tomiko90 2007-04-02 ch 1,	abuseWow...I don't even know what to say. This was very well written! I love it!
Only One In All 2007-03-22 ch 1,	abuseCool, this is a nice poem. I like the way it rhymes, and the second to last line gives the feeling it slowly takes you over as opposed to very suddenly. The last line gives it a more of a positive connotation, probably because of using the words softly and bloom. But I like it. :)
Carmel March 2007-03-19 ch 1,	abuseWonderful :)
Grayhome 2007-03-10 ch 1,	abuseI also got chills from this. It's beautiful and yet morbid. Very well done. But why did you choose this title?
Phantoms-fallen-angel 2006-11-25 ch 1,	abuseHey there, that was an awesome poem, a really beautiful analogy of death. I loved it. Cheers.
hey maria 2006-11-24 ch 1,	abuseI love the rhyming in this -- it's simplistic and sort of lullaby-ish, but the poem itself is haunting. And I love the image of death in the second stanza, like a cross between a flower and smoke. I really liked this and I'm adding it to my favorites. Keep writing.
sylvia's syndrome 2006-11-24 ch 1,	abuseI like the flow of this piece and the dark imagery. Reading this gave me goosebumps… and that’s a good thing. I also had the strangest feeling of déjà vu as I read this piece, like I had read this before. Anyway, keep up the good work!

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