Oh glob, you can't just end it there! Oh jeez, oh me, oh my(?) Anyway it was still amazing and I felt smart guessing that Jensen was a guy...at least until you went all 'Naw suck'a ya'll ain't guess shit! I left that shit in the obvi', but it was still nice through-out the whole thing... I only wish we knew what the shit was wrong with Lance... I assume he has feelings for 'What's his name (the main guy)' or maybe for Jensen... ANYWAY! I also wish you'd continue this... even though it's been like- 4 years or so.

In short, great story! Glad to see you still at least visit this sight (it had 2012 on the profile so I would assume...)

Toodles, yo.

wow...

wow... thats... wow.

oops... maybe its her/his older brother!

love it! ur a fantastic writer.

baby... i need more. lol. seriously, i want to know what happens. cuz where you ended it just wasn't nice. and i know you're all busy with your med school thing, being smart and all that.. but i think you should focus some of that amazing energy that i'm so in love with on scraping together a new chapter. (a good one that will make me swoon ;) ). D

Hm, found your account through the beta readers listing. I must say, you sound very interesting... and I'm slowly working my way through your stories.

I hope you're going to update this soon, though, because I'm hooked. Nice ambiguous cliffhanger; I mean, you've completely convinced me that Lance, in fact, can be mysterious/unreadable/whatever. I mean, many writers here describe some character to appear interesting but fail to live up to it in dialogue and behaviour. Am I making sense? Sorry, this has been a pet peeve of mine and to see someone doing a good job gives me this feeling of 'I want to hold this person's hands and thank them with twin waterfalls gushing out of my eyes' sort of thing. I felt warm when I realised Jen wasn't going to be dumped either. I mean, poor guy, even though he was being misleading, he liked the guy.

One thing though. I ignored the other typoes, but I think you overlook the distinction between 'bought' and 'brought' while proofreading. Yeah, it's hard to spot, but happened twice.

Anyway, keep going strong!

- fan fellowess.

congrats, you have just ruined the name Jensen for me! Haha, I have a class with a guy named jensen, so I just about died laughing when i saw jen's real name! thanks alot for staying up til i believe you said a "quarter past bleeding one!' Love the story and look forward to more.

I am convinced; you are the master of cliffhangers. Obviously. You are bad...in a good way.

Dammit! That can't be the last chapter for me! I need more! I want to know what Lance is actually doing.. Oh blast, patience never was my strong point.

This is actually really good. Not to say that I didn't think it would be, rather it's gone differently from what I had been expecting. I really liked the 'conclusion' that Dylan came to, about wanting to be with Jen. I think that's cool.

...So i figured it was high time i read something of yours.. they (stories) all sound really good, so I just started at the top.

I really like Lance, he sounds like a cool character! Good job so far. Lucky me, there are still six chapters left. D

Hi there. Admittedly, I didn't read this chapter. (I did read the synopsis though, and it sounds intriguing.. so I'll probably come back and check it out. ;)) I just figured this was the easiest way to say that you sound cool. Lol, call me random. I was reading your biography thing and thought you sounded like a pretty cool person and thought I'd pass that along. D I'm odd and random that way and very proud of it!

I know you said in your biography that you also read and review what your reviewers write; I think that's really cool. Do us both a favour though, and don't check out my stuff. At least not my story. I think the poetry (for lack of a better word) is all right, lol. I'm afraid I haven't tended to it lately and it's a little old because I wrote it a few years ago and it is certainly not as good as I would like it to be and I'm quite positive it would be a painful experience. ("And that, ladies and gentlemen, is the most incredible runon sentence you will ever find.") ..And I don't think this officially counts as a review anyway.

So, to make a long ..er.. not-story less long, you are cool. At least you sound cool. I just though I would pass that along. Random positive comments are always appreciated, that's what I've come to learn. ;)

Toodles!

pee-ess: I just realized how many times I used the word "cool".. Oi.

Yes. It has been awhile.

And I enjoyed the chpter..but I had to read back some just to remember what happened.

Let's try to remember to update!

no way

you really can't leave me hanging there :O !

hurry up and write the next installment because im absolutely postively utterly truly HOOKED.

x

NO NO NO

that can't be it!

jess write the next chapter!