Reviews for Down on the Dance Floor

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Sushi Samurai Geisha 2008-07-11 ch 9, anon.	abuseHm, found your account through the beta readers listing. I must say, you sound very interesting... and I'm slowly working my way through your stories. I hope you're going to update this soon, though, because I'm hooked. Nice ambiguous cliffhanger; I mean, you've completely convinced me that Lance, in fact, can be mysterious/unreadable/whatever. I mean, many writers here describe some character to appear interesting but fail to live up to it in dialogue and behaviour. Am I making sense? Sorry, this has been a pet peeve of mine and to see someone doing a good job gives me this feeling of 'I want to hold this person's hands and thank them with twin waterfalls gushing out of my eyes' sort of thing. I felt warm when I realised Jen wasn't going to be dumped either. I mean, poor guy, even though he was being misleading, he liked the guy. One thing though. I ignored the other typoes, but I think you overlook the distinction between 'bought' and 'brought' while proofreading. Yeah, it's hard to spot, but happened twice. Anyway, keep going strong! - fan fellowess.
Haru-chan 2008-06-02 ch 9,	abusecongrats, you have just ruined the name Jensen for me! Haha, I have a class with a guy named jensen, so I just about died laughing when i saw jen's real name! thanks alot for staying up til i believe you said a "quarter past bleeding one!' Love the story and look forward to more.
DiamondKing 2008-05-29 ch 9,	abuseI am convinced; you are the master of cliffhangers. Obviously. You are bad...in a good way.
Silken Silver Berries 2008-04-16 ch 9, anon.	abuseDammit! That can't be the last chapter for me! I need more! I want to know what Lance is actually doing.. Oh blast, patience never was my strong point. This is actually really good. Not to say that I didn't think it would be, rather it's gone differently from what I had been expecting. I really liked the 'conclusion' that Dylan came to, about wanting to be with Jen. I think that's cool. ^^
Silken Silver Berries 2008-04-16 ch 3, anon.	abuse...So i figured it was high time i read something of yours.. they (stories) all sound really good, so I just started at the top. ^^ I really like Lance, he sounds like a cool character!! Good job so far. Lucky me, there are still six chapters left. =D
Silken Silver Berries 2008-04-05 ch 1,	abuseHi there. Admittedly, I didn't read this chapter. (I did read the synopsis though, and it sounds intriguing.. so I'll probably come back and check it out. ;)) I just figured this was the easiest way to say that you sound cool. Lol, call me random. I was reading your biography thing and thought you sounded like a pretty cool person and thought I'd pass that along. =D I'm odd and random that way and very proud of it!! I know you said in your biography that you also read and review what your reviewers write; I think that's really cool. Do us both a favour though, and don't check out my stuff. At least not my story. I think the poetry (for lack of a better word) is all right, lol. I'm afraid I haven't tended to it lately and it's a little old because I wrote it a few years ago and it is certainly not as good as I would like it to be and I'm quite positive it would be a painful experience. ("And that, ladies and gentlemen, is the most incredible runon sentence you will ever find.") ..And I don't think this officially counts as a review anyway. So, to make a long ..er.. not-story less long, you are cool. At least you sound cool. I just though I would pass that along. Random positive comments are always appreciated, that's what I've come to learn. ;) Toodles! pee-ess: I just realized how many times I used the word "cool".. Oi.
a creature 2008-04-03 ch 9,	abuseYes. It has been awhile. And I enjoyed the chpter..but I had to read back some just to remember what happened. Let's try to remember to update! ^^
Felix17 2008-04-03 ch 9,	abuseno way you really can't leave me hanging there :O ! hurry up and write the next installment because im absolutely postively utterly truly HOOKED. x
Felix17 2008-04-02 ch 8,	abuseNO NO NO that can't be it! jess write the next chapter!
Felix17 2008-04-02 ch 7,	abusedeep deep deep
Felix17 2008-04-02 ch 6,	abuseO_o i cant get enough of this stuff
Felix17 2008-04-02 ch 4,	abusei effing adore lance and his wit :D:D:D jens cute!!
Felix17 2008-04-02 ch 5,	abusei almost forgot to review. i'm absolutely hooked
Felix17 2008-04-02 ch 3,	abuseLMFAO! i love lance.
Felix17 2008-04-02 ch 2,	abuseno way

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