Great story so far! I definently think that you should continue it! By the way, if you are a Cinderella person- My all-time favorite story on fictionpress is called Queen of Glass by SJMAAS- check it out!

Please update!
-Ellie Marlue

Great Stuff Kay! Keep it up!

ok, you absolutely have to continue this thing, i want to know what happened when they went! i hope there will be a snow storm and she'll end falling in love with Big foot, ...oh, sorry, please continue!!

Kayla, I love this new story, it's looking really good. I hope you continue it. The girl sounds like me when it comes to Valentine's day. I absolutely hate that holiday. I just had a fight with my boyfriend so I'm too keen on the whole romance deal right now.

But I updated The Lady in Black! I'm not really happy with the chapters, they make me sad when I read them. Please let me know what you think of it. I need some feedback, positive or negative.

Happy Holidays

-Liz

Only MAJOR plot flaw I've found is where in the world is her father getting the unlimited money to get six tickets to a far away part of the world? Or are they driving a converable somewhere in the upper part of Canada where it's nice and cold? All those miles costs major money. I know that was a harsh little spew but I thought I would point out the importance of that. While in Sci-Fi we have to take the authors word, realistic fiction has the real world thrown all over it. I personally think the real world's rules are a mess, but you know that's me.
If you already have a plan for the unlimited tickets I do truely appoligize and I want you to know the only reason I was so harsh about this is because I want your writing to grow even better than it is.
I love your charaters and all though. I really do. If you can just, clean that up I'll be a happy reviewer and write you a nice cheary review next time!
:D

This is hilarious... Update soon?

I like the beginning so far but if you think that it's not good enough go ahead but just please dont change Rose. She's the bomb.

I love Rose's personailty ! OMG seriously shes just awsume ! She reminds me of , well , me ! Lol , I dunno if thats bad or good .Hm. Lol .
Ok if you insit on changing things in this , don't change anyones personaitly ! I love how realistic they all seem . I ahd a few friends who dated scuzzy guys , but I always kept my mouth shut because they seemed so "in love " with htem ,even though I knew they were total poo .

I didn't know you liked Sister-hood of the travling pants ! I like them too ! I thought the 4th book was already out ? Uh , I guess I'll just ask my sister ( she works at Borders ) .

cute plot!

well...it seems okay so far. I don't see much of the beauty and the beast yet though...But I'll keep reading.

nifty story. i like.