Man, this is really good. The rhyme is masterful, I like this a lot. Sorry if this review doesn't fit into the definition of enthusiasm, compared to the last couple of 'em, but I was reviewing more than one at a time and I'm kinda emotionally spent. I should have reviewed when I was better at reviewing, but I wanted to get this done. I'll review again, if I have to, so it would sound better. But from what I got right now, it was an awesome read. Keep it up.

I don't get it.

Frankly, I simply don't see the connection between the title and the poem's content. True, it's obvious the girl is sad, melting almost. But I feel as if the poem's message is deeper than I can understand. I liked the last two lines up to "to lees." Don't take this wrongly, please; I'm not a pottery person and have no idea if you're referring to specific things. I'm just completely stumped.

Regardless, it was interesting to read so many big words packed into a poem. I may not understand what you're getting at, but it was an eye-catcher to say the least.

the last two lines were just stunning. love this piece.