Pretty good, I like the first four lines best. I think the ending could have something more powerful or thought provoking.

I like it, and I can relate. - I would so love somebody like that. I always seem to get stuck with the jerks that just make me want to scream -_-'

Aw, sweet and sad at the same time. I like it.

LT

aw that is so sweet, yet so sad at the same time, very well done, i love it! putting that in my favourites D

Cute. It's a common thing that I know I can kind of relate to, the subject that is, and it was put in a nice way.

Nice...good job