|Reviews for What if?|
| AluminumMuse 5/18/07 . chapter 1
Pretty good, I like the first four lines best. I think the ending could have something more powerful or thought provoking.
| Mouse Silver 2/21/07 . chapter 1
I like it, and I can relate. - I would so love somebody like that. I always seem to get stuck with the jerks that just make me want to scream -_-'
| Leeona Trance 11/29/06 . chapter 1
Aw, sweet and sad at the same time. I like it.
| madi.ao 11/25/06 . chapter 1
aw that is so sweet, yet so sad at the same time, very well done, i love it! putting that in my favourites D
| An-Author-At-Heart 11/24/06 . chapter 1
Cute. It's a common thing that I know I can kind of relate to, the subject that is, and it was put in a nice way.
| Arafax 11/24/06 . chapter 1