That was deep. It reminds me of a person I fancy a lot right now.
BernieV 2006-11-24 ch 1,
I think this poem shows your true feelings about him and I don't think it's a mess of a poem at all! In fact I believe it's one of your best and although all your poems and stories show much talent I ilike this best. Continue writing my dear and keep it up! Take care and cya at school sweety!! =D