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Reviews For: Chocolate Cake and Wedding Rings

j.d. egan
2007-10-08
ch 1,
Well I don't really care if it's too cliche, but like you I like it just the same. I thought it's sweet.
gummybearmurder
2007-04-10
ch 1,
:D Super cute.
Sarah D. F. Wall
2007-03-22
ch 1,
D: That was so cute. *blubbering*
kanari kireteru doll
2007-03-17
ch 1,
=D YEYEYEY!
Limited Edition
2006-12-01
ch 1,
Wahaha great imagery with the cereals, I could hear them squealing XD I love how it's cute without it trying desperately to come across as such.

"Sickening" is used one time too many. No, truthfully, it's one of those words that can't be used more than once. The rest of the story is so beautifully worded; descriptive, varied language, and then this word walks in.

"And then, to his horror, he could hear a car pulling up in the driveway." ?


HAHAHAHA the boxes tsk tsk XD Cracked me up. And oh my god the crying was even funnier XD So gay, so gay wahahahhahahaha omg


“Yes, yes, God Christan yes…” **!

Cute, sickeningly cute XD
ICaughtFire
2006-11-26
ch 1,
Aww, that was so sweet. And poor Christian. That whole situation was so horrible it made me laugh. The dog eating the cake, breaking his glasses...but the ending was completely adorable. Esecially love the "It's illegal" line. Bravo.
Professor Dazzle
2006-11-26
ch 1,
Aw!
The ending of this story was like...
I don't know enough vocabulary to describe it!
It was really cute.
And romantic.
And I hate the stupid law that says two people of the same gender can't get married.
Grr. Dammit.
Luffs,
Emika
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