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| Wishdreamer89 2007-02-27 ch 1,   | I love how it's raw. that's rare. you don't decode or sugar-coat a thing. that's nice. i like the ecstasy half the most; good times surprised me but opened up the meaning of your work & makes the emotion of the poem much stronger. once again; very nice. ~Wishdream |
| riotmaker 2007-01-02 ch 1, | i love this. it's long but it keeps an amazing thread of conscious beauty and disaster. and the ending is just perfect. ♥ |
| felicia13 2006-12-07 ch 1, | I'm liking how the different headings/seperate song-poems come together as one. It's like three different views of the same situation as time progresses. It's a different effect, but it's nice. Subject is a little blah, but ... what can you do? I enjoyed it. Felicia. |
| C. F. Handle 2006-11-26 ch 1, | Very smooth. I like the first section the most, but it all held me. Good one :-) |
| SirScott 2006-11-25 ch 1, | Great poem. I feel sorry for the boy in a way. ~SirScott |