Reviews for And This One Time

Reviews For: And This One Time

RedAmethyst 2007-02-24 ch 7,	Please update... please... I think this is the first horror story I've read yet that isn't about vampires... pretty please update. I wanna read more... God, I'm such a whiner.
Girly Wrath 2007-01-21 ch 7,	very good story. i can't wait for the next chapter.
Undrahas 2007-01-21 ch 7,	put more horror in! it needs it! oh well, it was a good story none the less. start another one plz!
Undrahas 2007-01-17 ch 5,	hey man. u kn ow i don't even read Kanes Feild right? i didn't actually jump i said i thought but hey wat ever. u had better update sooner! and yes u are lazy! lol. keep up the good work on the story. oh, and that little pit of darkness and the solid ground on the other side and the metal thing in the side of a wall is enough to freak ne one out. and it did me! so keep it up man! love the story! i'll try and read more of ur stories when ev k? love, Writingluver
Ambonne 2007-01-17 ch 3,	Oh wow XD You know how to write horror stories! XD
Undrahas 2006-11-30 ch 4,	i didn't actually jump. i said i felt like i was. but, i am scared to death at ur story! i swaer this is horror! keep it up! its...i don't know! it could be a page turner wich it is! it could be so horridly good, that i never want to stop reading! wich it is! it could be so good i wish that it was a book! wich it is! the story is that good. this chapter didn't really freak me out. but i do find it creepy on how Jacks watch stops on midnight. i also find it creepy on how the room he was just in is still intact. wat will happne next? know 1 knows, but u ofcourse! well, maybe u. cause sometimes i don't evwen know wats gonna happen in my stories. well, this is long but keep it up! keep doing this and u'll keep getting this stupidly long reviews! ur frined, Writingluver
Undrahas 2006-11-29 ch 3,	boy ur trying to freak me out beyound reason! thuis stoery is really scaring me now. i do find out wat happns next, but yet i'm to scared! this is scary and suspensefull! continue, continue i say! i love it! its refreshingly...scary, creepy, and a "page" turner! become an author! write this story and send it to an editor! i swear i will read the book if u decide to make it in to a book. i'm glad u enjoy writing it because i enjoy reading it! even if it is freaking me out and scaring me to the point where i could jump at the slighest sound that i wasn't expecting. wich happne ne way.
SanchezC 2006-11-28 ch 3,	Confused, but entertained. I'll keep reading. Keep up the good work.
Kazio 2006-11-27 ch 1,	Great story. Plot's fantastic, and the character is really imaginable. not like some other ones who are described with one word, like "drunk," "scary," "tall," or anything like that. Update, and keep up the good work! I think that you've really got something going on here.

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