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ANNIE 2008-08-14 ch 2,	Cool. update!
Cheezieball 2008-07-27 ch 2,	I dunno.. maybe cos I'm procrastinating studying but.. I'm not sure if these are even actual mistakes or my grammar is just bad but yeah.. Before I start nitpicking, I'd just like to say.. LOL at the seemingly random 'BREAKBREAKBREAK' thingy xD Okay maybe I'm just easily amused ._. i)"Gaelen’s eyes widened with horror. When she had come to the city, she hadn’t expected a possibility of getting dying." Getting killed?
Cheezieball 2008-07-27 ch 1,	I'm going to review.. because you asked for it (okay.. not really.. I can be bothered to right now cos I have ice cream ._.) Sounds like a promising start =DD I actually want a pair of overalls.. kinda ._.
SocialInhalation 2008-07-01 ch 2,	PLEASE UPDATE! i want to know what happens and i want to know if Gaelen rips Damien a new one! ... well, you're the author! i want to know
Let Them Eat Cake 2008-06-19 ch 2,	Ah! This is cute so far! Gaelen is so overly pure and innocent it isn't even funny! And Damien is an **, but not at the same time. You see that rather consciously nice bits of him, but JUST barely! He's a really interesting character so far! :D I'm really enjoying this so far, but I'm hoping with the next chapter, I'll feel a little more connected with the characters. I don't think it's anything you guys are doing wrong; I just think it's because it's so early in the story right now! I'm really liking this so far! Update soon please! :D -Kay (Let Them Eat Cake) (PS, sorry Da Vinci at Work, but I think EnAce was right! :D Agnes is much better preppy than emo. But maybe you can pull in some emos and punks in later! -shrugs- I'd love to read Gaelen's reactions to them. Maybe the emos would stop being emo because she'll make them appreciate what they have! Hahaha! ;D)
Jainblu 2008-06-07 ch 2,	Yaysum :) One question, how the hell do you guys have 52 reviews after two chapters... is Jealous Dude seriously I can hardly get two reviews per chapter let alone 26 per chapter (mean average ;) Anyhu, I like this story. It makes me smile, and laugh and frown (when Haides opens his mouth) stupid boy!. Lol I don't really hate his character, well ... okay... no... I mean, I. Don't. Hate him. I just dislike him with a passion right now, but clearly there has to be a valid reason for his two faced assedness (Yay... new word ... ^_^), right... :) So I'm willing- well not really- to give him the benefit of the doubt... Okay well I noticed some mistakes when I was reading, but now looking back I can't really point them, I think they were mainly typos, and there was this one bit where it referred to he rather than the she it started off with... Anywho you two are probably just writing it now, and will probably fish out these minor errors when you're finished right. Okay and woo hoo, for the now -hopefully- regular updates. Lot's of
Ice and Snow 2008-05-27 ch 2,	it's been a year =D continue soon?
Terras1fan 2008-01-19 ch 2,	Pahaha, you know you should really continue this story. It's so orignally cute and fun, and I like it. Updating are the hardest things to do, but try and you wil succeed eventually. I'll read if you write! --Terra
Lady Katreina 2007-09-28 ch 2,	Wow, I like how this story's going. Thank you for making it. I love Gaelen's name and character, heh, she's probably one of the healthiest girls in the school.
sh0rtii J avenue 2007-08-24 ch 2,	please keep updating it's really good so far i think that Gae-something should get at least a few close friends and that Fletcher and Ethan sould get to be friends with her too
Luminaerie 2007-07-18 ch 2,	Now, what I hope for even more is for Da Vinci at Work to get off her ** and write the next chapter. That way I can get back to ToTM and the new story I’m working on. Which would be… quite different from my normal stuff. - oh, da vinci at work, she told YOU! lol. same thing in my last review. great but needs a bit more style - it feels like i read the same style of writing every time! VARIETY PEOPLE! other than that, great job!
Luminaerie 2007-07-18 ch 1,	hey ! this message is directed at Da Vinci At Work this is golden sapphire reporting, after what seems like a decade but its really a year. great beginning! even though the beginning-beginning didn't really push me into the story (i was more dragged into the story, if you get what i mean). anyway, great job! i love the part with the bunny-talking! im sorry to say that the only writing i will write anytime soon will be harry potter fanfiction. but hey, i might get some inspiration some day. your bio/profile was certainly inspired, i cant believe you put me there! blushes anyway, im not that good an author, they're other superb authors on anyway, im ranting, great job once agian! and i hope you can catch up on things around here without you trying to kill me! grins nervously well, then, bye! cowers under desk
daretobe-dIfFeRnT 2007-05-06 ch 2,	lol Gaelen is so cute and innocent:) Damiens an ** so far but, like you said maybe he'll get better lol update soon!
Chowderhead (cocoa latte!) 2007-04-28 ch 2,	ooh hey, awesome chapter! 24 hours of smiling? wow. i loved it, and im seriously looking forward to the next chapter, took you guys long enough to update the story. i better not be kept waiting for this long again!
Reading W Wench 2007-04-25 ch 2,	:D GREAT CHAP! an oopsie I found fall on my ** hellarious "possibility of getting dying." it just really struck my fuuny bone

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