|Reviews for Let Me 2|
| Olivine 12/10/06 . chapter 1
yeah, if only someone could do that for me. this line kind of reminds of a song im absolutely in love with. i dont if youve heard it, because im not sure theyd play this on the radio over there in england, but its called boston, and its by augustana. just look up the lyrics or something, and youll see why it reminds of it.
keep on writing -Ss.
| hellbentheretic 12/3/06 . chapter 1
Don't know if I like this one as much as the first. My advice is to throw the whole poem down in one go- that is if you have it done. This will facilitate easier understanding and continuity than what you are doing here. Otherwise I can't really get a sense of where you're going with this.
The title is very suggestive of a great work if you're not afraid to let it flow a little more;)
| QuixoticQuetzal 12/2/06 . chapter 1
Interesting. I liked both of these that you put up, this one moreso than the first one.
| Just Luke Staden 11/29/06 . chapter 1
you started writing again too! It's a nice sentence but needs more. i know your going to say you dont care what people say about it but you obviously do if you post it on the internet just as i do. Its good just lacking in volume.