This is a really great poem. Rather you speaking from your own experince or not Still great. I feel it was meant to be sad but i feel this justice and not being sorry because another life was taken. I read this about 2 days ago but didnt know how to reply to this. ha. Check out my poems and review if you get the chance! -

Wow. You are a great writer. No question.

Good job conveying the emotion. I love how in the beginning before you found out what happened you kept the reader at suspense.

Good poem

Tesa

I felt so many emotions coming from this-first it was anger. Then pity, then immense sadness... and then it was anger again. Very sad... very, very sad.

But well-written, and heartfelt.

-DynamicEquilibrium