Wow. You are a great writer. No question.

Good job conveying the emotion. I love how in the beginning before you found out what happened you kept the reader at suspense.


Good poem

~~Tesa

I felt so many emotions coming from this--first it was anger. Then pity, then immense sadness... and then it was anger again. Very sad... very, very sad.
But well-written, and heartfelt.

-DynamicEquilibrium