Good start but the short chapters are slightly annoying. So seeing as I am british, i really hope you dont offend my people in any of the future chapters. ill keep reading and i hope u check out some of my works

Lol I say yee haw all the time! ) Are you from the south yourself?

This was a cute chapter. But could you make them longer? I really like the story, so it'd be nice to read more ). And I love that Leah makes her own clothes! I love that name, Leah. And people who make rad clothes are pretty rad. Lol.

-Jackie

Oh geez! I like this one! I have a southern accent myself, living in Florida, so this is definitely gonna be good for me. I say y'all all the time! I think its so funny when people laugh at that. I dunno why, I just do. Update again soon!

-Jackie

Another story :)

I had a little trouble reading this but only because of how it was laid out. You may want to break it apart a bit and put a few paragraphs in there. I'm excited to read more... of both of your stories! Keep writing!

:)T