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| Frore 2006-11-27 ch 1, | Pretty! The imagery in this is, while used in other poems before, is very enjoyable. Your word usage makes me smile. |
| sylvia's syndrome 2006-11-27 ch 1, | This is a nice piece. I liked the effect of the parallelism in the structure of the poem; it helped tie everything together. Keep up the good work! |