|Reviews for Under A Lover's World|
| Frore 11/27/06 . chapter 1
Pretty! The imagery in this is, while used in other poems before, is very enjoyable. Your word usage makes me smile.
| sylvia's syndrome 11/27/06 . chapter 1
This is a nice piece. I liked the effect of the parallelism in the structure of the poem; it helped tie everything together. Keep up the good work!