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Reviews For: Under A Lover's World

Frore
2006-11-27
ch 1,
Pretty! The imagery in this is, while used in other poems before, is very enjoyable. Your word usage makes me smile.
sylvia's syndrome
2006-11-27
ch 1,
This is a nice piece. I liked the effect of the parallelism in the structure of the poem; it helped tie everything together. Keep up the good work!
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