Why did you not finish this? It's super! Now I'm angry...

Interesting! I really enjoyed this. Your POV is very new and refreshing.

-Niki

This is haunting . . .

Plese update soon!! Your story has got a very interesting concept so far. I really want to know though about Eshana's heritage and how all the merpeople died. Please update soon!!

More? Please? Soon? You have a very interesting story line... I'd really like to read more!

well the story would be better i didn't have the gummi bears theme song stuck in my head. on a lighter note, good so far, a little confusing as to the pov switch, but still good. one question, why was her tail burning, and how did that cause her to freak out?

Awesome! I liked that! I also re-read the prologue and chapter 1.

It was really good. I'm SLIGHTLY confused on what happened, but I'll deal.

Update soon!

^^ Another wonderful chapter! yay!

I totally read all of this! Great job! This was so awesome! This is awesome!

That went way to quickly, and very uninteresting until the slight dialouge with explaining the name.

Unfortunately I'm admitting I skimmed over most of it.

This really gives the illusion of depressing silence.

omigsoh!! i love it so far! the first two chapter were kinda boring (sorry) but i love this one. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Dreail. I like his name and I definately like what you've written so far!! pls update!

the title caught my eye, so here i am. haha. lovely description in the first chapter, and i liked this one too. update soon(: this story is interesting.

Yay! You updated! And it's wonderful still!

~Kay~