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| Cloak-of-Shadows 2007-03-19 ch 1,  | abuseTo me, this was complex for someone to read through only once. Took me at least four times to grasp what I interpreted fully of the poem. This in itself is often good, it gives people more room to interpret. Imagery is excellent. Flow when I read it is chaotic, but since the situation portrayed is chaotic, it is probably best to have it so. Excellent poem. I suggest continue writing on. |
| Travis C. Eckert 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abuseGood descriptions, keep on writing. |