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Cloak-of-Shadows 2007-03-19 . chapter 1
To me, this was complex for someone to read through only once. Took me at least four times to grasp what I interpreted fully of the poem. This in itself is often good, it gives people more room to interpret. Imagery is excellent. Flow when I read it is chaotic, but since the situation portrayed is chaotic, it is probably best to have it so.

Excellent poem. I suggest continue writing on.
Travis C. Eckert 2006-11-30 . chapter 1
Good descriptions, keep on writing.
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