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| the jazz 2007-03-25 ch 5,  | abuseEDIT! PLEASE! aw i'm really going to miss will and gordie...and i was hoping something would happen to michelle...oh but, this was a really great read after farm boys! :) you've got obvious talent. |
| AbbeyEileen 2007-02-08 ch 5, | abuseAw... I like Travis, he reminds me of Wes from Pysch... |
| DeviantHeart31 2007-01-06 ch 4, | abuseWhy didn't he tell her right there, its was like perfect. I feel so sorry for Travis. And Carry well, its was kinda obvious Will and Gordon liked each other. But, yaY!! something finally happned between them;] |
| AbbeyEileen 2007-01-04 ch 4, | abuseAw... Travis is so sweet, and she's just so oblivious... Just because I'm curious, do you know how long this will be? |
| DeviantHeart31 2006-12-03 ch 3, | abuseMichelle seems to be the only one thats actualli aware that Will and Gordon like each other, its kinda funny. Even though shes just there to whine and stuff, i find her funni. Why did paul have to ruin it, even though that was funni, he just came out of nowhere. Poor boys:] |
| AbbeyEileen 2006-12-03 ch 3, | abuseFirst of all, your reply: "She's kind of an extra character, one who can whine and be smart and stuff." That's how I feel my life is. I just sit at school and whine at my friend about this or that and then help her with advanced Spanish work that even my class isn't on yet. It's actually fun for me, but she thinks I'm just an extra person in our group. Hee. Aw, Paul!! He's hilarious, if only because all he's said is "Hey, boys, what's up?" and ruined the perfect moment... ONLY FIVE CHAPTERS?!? No! I don't want it to end! I really like this story... it's even coming closer and closer to Psych Class Secrets, which was pretty awesome, if you ask me. What do you have planned for after this story? Besides College Boys, obviously... though I wouldn't mind seeing a bit more to that... |
| DeviantHeart31 2006-11-30 ch 2, | abuseWhy did the phone have to ring!! They were so close to Kissing. Its kinda amusing that Carrie has a thing for Gordie, but he gay. She should pay more attetion to Travis. Cant waite for more action scenes with Will and Gordie;] |
| AbbeyEileen 2006-11-30 ch 2, | abuseI really like Travis. He's different then I'd expect him to be- just reading your summary, I saw Michelle and Carrie fighting over him and for him to be cocky... but he really isn't. He just likes Carries and she's mooning over a gay boy. Blame my short attention span, but where exactly does Michelle fight into this? Was she the one who didn't want a boyfriend? I really like this story, but I want more "College Boys"!! |
| DeviantHeart31 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abusei like dis is good;}, and i like the fact dat they college boys...more drama..0.o.. hope you continue :] |
| camikaza 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseyay! nice chapter^^ hope you update soon! with college boys to, yeah ^^ go on! |
| AbbeyEileen 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abuseOh. I like it. But, while I'm trying to be open, I still love Psych Class Secrets. I reread it on Thursday when the rest of my family gorged on turkey. Oh, Will and Gordie. What talking pig movie are you talking about? The only one I can think of it Babe... or maybe Charlotte's Web...? |