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| Kalista Jia 2008-08-11 ch 1,  | abuseI usually dont review much but this is absolutely adorable@! |
| Bluorange 2008-08-05 ch 12, | abuseOh... It would be hard to be a girl trapped in a boy's body! EEKS! |
| Bluorange 2008-08-04 ch 10, | abuseI wish something like that owuld happen at MY school! Holy cow! That'd be awesome! WOO! |
| Bluorange 2008-08-04 ch 9, | abuseYOU BASTARD! *slaps you* |
| Bluorange 2008-08-04 ch 8, | abuseew... o_o hehe, jk. that was hot! |
| Bluorange 2008-08-04 ch 7, | abuseAw... So loveable! I want Kevin! DAMN! |
| Bluorange 2008-08-04 ch 6, | abuseCute! CUTE! *rabid fanboy eyes* |
| Bluorange 2008-08-04 ch 5, | abuseOHMIGOD Yay for man sex! And kissing! Woo! |
| Bluorange 2008-08-04 ch 4, | abuseI hope there's a hot sex scene! Teehee! |
| Bluorange 2008-08-04 ch 3, | abuseWoo! Kissing! YAY! I'm sure Dani is in heaven! Hehehehe... |
| Bluorange 2008-08-04 ch 2, | abuseThis story is REALLY pretty! I'm starting to wonder what I'd look like with drag on... Hm... probably weird but hot! heehee! I love the characters! It's from a point of view that I KNOW is easy for you to relate to! Lol |
| Bluorange 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuseOH my GOD! This is adorable! It's the best semi-straight romance I've ever read! HOLY CRAP! Yay! Go ahead and respond to this, if you wish, lolz. I love Dani! It would be fun to wear drag! You're such a bad influence on me! WAAH! |
| Hilio 2008-07-26 ch 1, anon. | abuse(keep in mind that I've only read the first chapter and will most likely not be reading any further.) Not to sound mean, this is really well written fic and all, but I don't like that BOTH of them are constantly calling 'dani' a she. Kevin caught himself a few times, sure, but even in 'Dani's' pov you kept saying she. I get that he wants to be a girl, but you wrote that it was his first time crossdressing in public so it makes me feel like he wouldn't be so secure with referring to himself as a girl. At least not yet. (well...I guess you could say it's YOU that's constantly referring to him as a she since your the narrator) Idk, I would have liked for you to call him a he because that would continue to remind us that he really is a boy, just one that's struggling with his identity as a homosexual teenager. I'm afraid that the rest of this fic will be written the same and, sadly, I'm way to picky to be able to sit through it. Keep up the good work though...that's all I would have liked to be different, otherwise, it's very interesting. :p |
| MUMSI 2008-07-06 ch 17, | abuseYou've managed to rip me from the lovely pull of sleep for an intense period of time- I must say, I'm ridiculously happy to be this tired. Your story is the f-ing b o m b. Like, you nuked me and all my people bomb. God, I'm so ridiculously happy for having read this. Dani/Danny/Daniel is my hero. My absolute hero. Kevin makes me soft in the heart . Their classmates make me want to love the world. Their families gave me hope. God. This packed a punch. Thanks for a brilliant read. Kevin for President! |
| Zyril 2008-06-19 ch 17, | abuseI really love this story! It is so powerful! Not to mention a beautiful romance. Keep writing! |