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Jayjack
2008-06-29
ch 2,
abuseOMFG! wow. that was one of the BEST one-shots i have ever READ. top 5 definitely.
starlit x sky
2007-08-16
ch 2,
abuseOh my gosh!
One word: amazing.
This story was awesome!
Megan Christine
2007-07-01
ch 2,
abusewonderful! Usually I don't like one-shots b/c they never make me feel satisfied with the conclusion, but this one was amazing! You crammed a great story into two short chapters. Good Job.
digitalprints
2007-06-24
ch 2,
abuseOne word: Amazing.

Seriously, that was such an amazing story. From the plot to the character descriptions and everything, the whole story was just great! You definitely incite alot of different emotions from your reader and just have to say, you are a talented writer!
yarrowicefrost
2007-06-21
ch 2,
abuseGreat story...It was a pleasure to read :) I liked everything about it, especially how it was very well-written.
Pop the Bubble
2007-06-18
ch 2,
abuseah
awesome
like yes.
is jerome pronounced jerome or like jeromy?
xx
Moosher
2007-04-30
ch 2,
abuseBy far one of the best One-shots Ive read on FP. Amazing. Made me feel all giddy inside.. Keep up the great work.
ess3sandra
2007-04-29
ch 2,
abusejesus, this is hot stuff. i say it agani, do al ong one of it. a wonderful story, really, its amazing. we! i really really REALLY like it, straigt to fav i say!
ess3sandra
2007-04-29
ch 1,
abuseGIRL, this i amazing, it is well, wonderful. so good. i really think you should do a story out if this, a long one i mean. well done i say!
s-pecial-lee me
2007-03-28
ch 2,
abusei love it. i think you should continue it a chapter or so, how the schools react
beingmyself
2007-03-22
ch 2,
abuseWell I enjoyed reading it again, Lol.
nisha
2007-02-26
ch 2, anon.
abusewow!That was amazing!Would you consider continuing this?
swimchickslam
2007-02-24
ch 2,
abuseHm I have a feeling i've read this before. oh wells :)
faedora
2007-01-30
ch 1, anon.
abusedamn, that was long...but it was good :) i think it would've been better if you had split the one-shot into four chapters or something :) it would've been a little easier to read for us, but still, great job! cheers!
JustLikeMe91
2007-01-20
ch 1,
abuseThis was soo good!
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