FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| angel 2007-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseinteresting...not much sense...but interesting. |
| Kirona of the skies 2007-01-29 ch 1,  | abuseThis starts out confusing. I can just see the concept you're trying to get at, but it's fuzzy and hard to grasp...however, it does become more clear as you go on. While the initial confusion gives the impression of this being poorly written, I think it creates a good effect...whether or not that is what you were aiming for. She's finding herself at the same rate that you are finding the meaning behind the words. It's good. So, I'm basically saying that I like this, in a roundabout sort of way. It leaves you with a smile. Makes you feel good without having emotions forced down your throat. Good job. =D |
| cocaine and cherries 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseoh wow. how have i not found you? i could kick myself. dammit. incredible, incredible. |
| a e i o u and sometimes y 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuseamazing. i like that bit about alcohol poetry, and the bracelets from stars. simply wonderful. |
| miss-hyperactive 2006-12-02 ch 1, | abusei love it. i just simply love it. its simply complicated. |
| heresyisforlosers 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseWow... Powerful! I really like this. It's very descriptive and mysterious.. sb |