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| qblisa 2006-12-12 ch 1,  | abuseYou captured the feeling of being totally alone, when the whole world seems to sleep. Everyone around you is blissfully ignorant of your problem, and "the night drags on". I feel like this a lot. Lisa |
| FunkyFlower16 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuselol, this is exactly what i feel like when i cant sleep at night. same imagery so i can relate completely. great job, ~mez~ |
| Aquafied 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseThinking lyrical thoughts In the middle of the Night while the Sandman takes his Time -dear me, that is perfect it has a whimsical reality winter as the frost pools in the endless summer |
| Eirien 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseGood description. I especially like the image "head as cobwebby...". I know sleepnessness myself. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseDoes everyone have issues with insomnia? Seems to be a popular topic to write about. I know my own poem about insomnia seemed to be really popular. Anyway, this is nice. I especially like the 3rd to last stanza, the lines "Cold tarmac below frozen/In orange streetlight" especially. Just nice images, great language, good use of sound. Wonderful poem. Keep writing! :) |
| Artemis Obscure 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseWhimsy and light. I like this, as everyone knows how it feels to be awake under the circumstances you described. |
| PhotographedTuesday 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuselol! @ your A/N. Ayee. Brilliant. Its 3:48 am right now and i am, indeed, suffering from a case of sleeplessness. I can relate to this more than I expected :) good job. |
| Deadtoast 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseI like it, but I'll admitt I was pulled in by the fact that I just wrote a poem about my forced sleeplessness. It is cool to see two people take something similar and make it different. |