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| amillionlittlepieces 2007-03-22 ch 1,  | abuseyour words are so ** beautiful. Brilliant! "you pick up the pieces, “this is your heart” and we throw them into the street," I love your poetry. |
| ShadesofBlue69 2006-12-23 ch 1, | abusehm, you could of ended w/ "we pertend to bleed for know reason" but the last stanzas are quite nice..but they could be done w/ out. i don't really see how the whole "I am still so ** bored" fits in with the rest of the poem...I mean, it sorat fits in, but not really, or you don't syress its point enough in your poem. but once again, nice imagery and I really like the line "while the street lights desecrate my hiding spots)" that is delicious. |
| call me ish 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abuselet's evolve, into the people, generation, we want to be. you make me laugh smile and sigh. i wish your life could be all the good parts, and never the bad. the buildup without the falloff. you're stuff will never cease to amaze me |
| by His blood 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseyour poetry ... i never quite know what to say. it's beautiful. this poem is beautiful, you write in a way that comforts me somehow because finally, finally someone gets it right. i don't know how to explain it. your words are honest and raw, broken and beautiful, and ** i love this and you are amazing. |
| dollface and her cancer 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abusestreetlights, secrets, and sedatives. lord, i love this. |
| lackluster 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuse"I draw flowers onto the backs of my hands,/outlined in red sharpie and colored in/with green eyeliner that shimmers when/I bite my nails" like magic. this poem has such a mystical shine to it, half hiding in the dark. |
| riotmaker 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abusei love this. to death. "your guitar must be lonely tonight, / and we keep walking".. everything is just so ** amazing. i love your poetry. its beyond words. [favoritess]. ♥ |
| PhotographedTuesday 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuse:o. bravo! favoriting. i especially loved the lines like "a truth about tomorrow - i'm starting to suffocate-" and "we call it in the air, heads and i'm yours"...brilliant. well done :) |