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| Franziska 2008-04-22 ch 6,  | abuseDas bringt die Sache auf den Punkt! |
| Franziska 2008-04-22 ch 3, | abuseand you hate yourself for loving him (or for having loved him). Du verarbeitest auf knappest möglichste Weise die Komplexheit der Gefühle |
| Getuie 2007-02-09 ch 8, | abuseAnother perfect image... you're so good at finding different images to convey things so exquisitely. |
| Getuie 2007-02-09 ch 7, | abusePerfect image... captures the whole idea of broken trust completely. |
| Getuie 2007-02-09 ch 3, | abuseThis poem I can relate to... It's a never ending cycle, isn't it? Love... hate... hating oneself for hating... forcing oneself back to love... only to have it happen again, and again, and again. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-12-27 ch 8, anon. | abuseCareful reflection. |
| Anastasia Who 2006-12-27 ch 6, anon. | abuseWow. So very true. Learning to trust again isn't an easy task. |
| Basara 2006-12-23 ch 8, anon. | abuseyep! true! nice... |
| Basara 2006-12-23 ch 6, anon. | abuseeasier said than done... nice... |
| Basara 2006-12-23 ch 3, anon. | abusewell, it's true for guilt that to hate yourself from hating a person... nice... |
| Ygg 2006-12-22 ch 8, anon. | abuseOoh this is great! I especially love your adjectives, because they create a subtle tension, like "soft", "pink" vs "raw" and "injured". The last line is absolutely perfect in its analogy with broken trust.. the scar might be healed, new tissue might conceal it, yet it always stays with you, always reminds you, and it changes you forever. Marvelous poem! |
| Ygg 2006-12-22 ch 6, anon. | abuseSo simple, so true.. very self-reflecting also! Great work again. |
| sleeping Pisces 2006-12-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseI like the conflicting feelings in this haiku. Great work. Daze |
| Basara 2006-12-22 ch 2, anon. | abusesaddening...then find a needle and a thread to weave yourself again... nice... |
| Basara 2006-12-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseouch... the grim reality! nice... |