WOAH MAMA!! Tsuki u are just so...SO! *shivers* very elaborately detailed and the figurative language is uh-mazin. love it. [but kinda...volatile?] lol.

wonderful beginning, one definitely worth waiting for. i have some new stuff up to if you wish to read... but i can't wait for the outcome, plz update soon.
-draculas soprano X^_^X

Utterly expressive and mildly creepy. I like it. Good adjective use, no normal boring descriptions, very easy to visualize. Ah, good death. Such a subject to write about, eh?