I've always wondered how haikus receive so many reviews, just because they are so short, but when a small poem can show so much meaning and emotion, I can finally understand.
After I read this haiku I was like wow...from the lovely smile going away to leave you in tears...just how it's written...hmm...I love it!

I love the contrasting imagery in this 'ku. The fading light to the tears works nicely. Nice job!

Nicely written. Good use of imagery.

Wow.. nice imagery...Thanks for reviewing Perseverance(:

Oh, this is beautiful. I love the image of a smile melting. Strong verb usage there. Nice work. Keep writing! :)

The undertones in this haiku were dark. Emotional haiku are hard to pull off, but I think you have done it here. Great haiku, impressive.

Daze

Beautiful imagry and emotion, I love this! Awesome job!

Haikus have so little room to say what you want to, which is why I sometimes think they are pretty hard to write. You did this haiku justice, but I don't really get the feeling that this haiku was filled with emotion. But, perhaps, it's just me.

Thanks so much for the review, and the add to your favourites list!

Rowan.

ouch...

nice...