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| Kriss-C 2007-02-12 ch 1,  | abuseOnce again that was a very good poem... Great job! |
| Elle Austen 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is a little depressing...but beautiful. My preferences just are lighter tones. I feel as though I can relate to this story a little bit when I cheated on my b/f. Some of your phrases but into words what I felt. It was interesting to read them. Wouldn't it be great to turn back time? Just for that one time, too. Nicely done. I would like to see you write a play. Another random request, lol, but I think it would really test your skill and your talent would shine through as it does in everything you write. |