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| somuchformyhappyending 2008-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseLOVED THIS. so intense. I loved how it was so sudden. I really did. great job. Bec |
| BrokenHeartedAngel 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abuse~_^ |
| Sakka-Fenikkusu 2006-12-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, that's pretty powerful. |
| Broken Petals 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseGreat format. Great poem, very sad, and unfortunately, true in many cases. My name's Sara too. . . just with no 'h'. . .^^; heh heh. . . Keep writing. |
| Twack 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseWow... Personally dealing with a lot of suicide, including my fathers’ I really connected with this poem. it was really good I liked your use of formatting. The only thing I didn't like is that at the end I didn't care. You didn't make Sarah a person she just seemed to be there and by the end, which was rather sudden, she's gone. This is just my opinion ~Twack |