Wow, this is a really interesting story O.O Other than a few grammatical errors here and there, everything else seems to be just fine. Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to reading the continuation to this story ^^

Not a bad start. Good names, and the dream goes very fluidly. Sort of wondering why the Japanese myth has a Greek name lol...overall it's a great story so far, looking forward to Part II
-ByFyreLyte (Kaze on

I can't wait to read what role Evgenikos will play in Claire's life and how often she will see this Quilin (That is if that's how you spell it) This is a well structured story, nice descriptions, close to no grammar mistakes whatsoever. (I say close to none because I'm not the best with dicephering grammar mistakes)