Please keep writing this story. It's really good!

An interesting start to a story; but wouldn't it make sense to feed from Sophie? If Cedric only took a little blood at a time, and she stayed on a high glucose diet, it might be okay.

Wow, this is really good Mirage

This can't be your first mature romance, cause you're really good at writting them.

I can't really criticise anything, the spelling's fine, the story's easy to follow, it's just really good!

- Giga

Dear Lady Knight of Camelot,

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write another chapter really soon! it is the worst thing when you are really into a story, and you have to wait for days in AGONY over the next chapter!

PLEASE PLEASE WRITE AGAIN SOON!

yours sincerely,

Fifteen-days-of-bliss