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| cakenoodle 2006-11-28 ch 1,  | abuseSo true. Good job. |
| Rosemarine 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseNot best poem ever. Could be more expressive. People crank out so many of these things, you really have to make yours stand out to be taken seriously. It just feels dry and crusty. I mean, why shouldn't i go feast on what everyone else has to offer? You gotta suck people in and make them FEEL and TASTE the words |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseVery powerful emotion in this. Truly relatable and heartfelt. Good work. |