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| boys kiss girls 2007-02-09 ch 1,  | abusethis is a bit interesting. personally, i don't think the taste of cigarettes would be very appealing... but what ever bakes your bread, i guess. i've also never had marzipan, is it good? i've wanted to try it before, though. i like how the reader really gets a good sense of the kiss (or just the taste in general). good job. |