I was wondering when you're going to update?

good story keep it going! u got me hooked

this is really sad but good

Thuis is the best storie i have even heard. And i have heard alot of good stories. Please continue it i would love to read the rest. The song is good also and it relate alot 2 the storie.

this is not only a GREAT song, but this is also very very well written. great job!