|Reviews for The Lies|
| xDancingintheRainx 2/10/07 . chapter 1
I really like the way you worded this piece. I can feel the emotion radiating from it. Great job!
| je suis une pomme du terre 2/8/07 . chapter 1
Wow. This is really good. I love the way you wrote the whole poem as if she was an impenatrable fortress, and then you end it in such a contradictory way... Just... wow. Just wow. :P LoL Good job and keep it up.
P.S. Thanks for your review . I love getting them.
| Wylloa 1/22/07 . chapter 1
I really loved this, especially the first four lines and the last line... though, when you say impregnable... I think you might mean inpenatratable. Inprgnable means able to get pregnant...but all in all, this was a wonderful poem.
Kudos... i added this to my favs.
| Guest 12/4/06 . chapter 1
Although this poem doesn't seem like something I would usually like, it works really well. Keep writing!
| Moi Dix Mois 11/28/06 . chapter 1
Kind of sounds like something I might write...