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2006-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery Deep Song, Conveying Lots Of Emotion. I Especially Like The Lines "You're the only one who can get me into the light//But I feel that it's never going to happen". It's Very Sweet & Can Reflect & Relate To The Feelings Of Many People. There's A Thick Sense Of Loneliness, & The Reader Is Sympathetic Towards The Character. I Also Love "Who am I to get myself out". It's A Very Tragic Line. All In All, A Brilliant Job! ^_^ Lots Of Love & Best Wishes ~ xo Secrets |