Reviews for Inside Your Eyes - FictionPress.com

darkpaladin13 2006-12-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseTechnically/Grammatically it's very well-polished. It's good for an opening chapter...and coming from someone who does not like stories, that says something.
Princess Alice 2006-11-28 ch 1,	abuseHey hey :) This is really good...seriously. It doesn't sound like you, but in a good way, like I can read it as a spectator and not someone who's close to the author. Yknow what I mean? The writing is great. A few typos but who even cares lol? That's what editors are for ;)