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Reviews For: My Goddess, My Demons
trash can art 2006-11-28 . chapter 1
yes! this was the one you sent, nay? i couldn't get enough of it the first few times and reread it plenty. so many moments int his poem, i won't even bother highlighting them like your previous reviewer.
wicked-design-288 2006-11-28 . chapter 1
The title alone is just gorgeous. But the contents are even better. I absolutely love this! Once again, you surprised me with the ending! That's what I love about your poems. This one is just fabulous...great job!
My favorite:
"I am imperfect
A freak in the mirror
Misshapen body, unholy looks
Her gender twin
But she is a goddess
The perfect body, soul, and mind"
and

"‘tis all but a dream
But for me, a life without her
This is my everlasting nightmare."
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