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| Ohmm 2006-12-16 ch 1,  | abuseI like the contrast between the italicised & the not, how some parts are so pretty while others are scientific. Good take on nature! (: The redbluegreenyellow hue part is really nice. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseWow, you really know how to use rhythm to your advantage. This is incredibly well thought-out. You use color really well, also, along with sound and imagery. Just overall a really nice poem. Keep writing! :) |