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Ohmm
2006-12-16
ch 1,
abuseI like the contrast between the italicised & the not, how some parts are so pretty while others are scientific. Good take on nature! (:

The redbluegreenyellow hue part is really nice.
no.peace.los.angeles
2006-11-28
ch 1,
abuseWow, you really know how to use rhythm to your advantage. This is incredibly well thought-out. You use color really well, also, along with sound and imagery. Just overall a really nice poem. Keep writing! :)
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