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| E.S. Lundgren 2007-10-06 ch 1, | nicely done, it feels like it flows, the word choice is a little boring but it keeps things simple i suppose. i kept waiting for something to really pop out but it seemed a tad predictable, probably after reading all of this supernatural stuff on fictionpress, haha. i don't know if any of that was helpful or not, but you should put some other writing up, there is a copy right law on here (though i don't feel safe putting my 'potential publish' writing up either) but it would be nice to look forward to some other works. over all, well done! |
| CingStarz 2007-03-09 ch 1, | wow...i like this, narrative poems are the best, and I like the mystery surrounding this one :) very cool... |
| Kidwiththecap 2007-01-12 ch 1, | OMG! Vampires right? I'm guessing cause it's under supernatral and it saod "bare your neck" Spooky. (Shudders) I love vampires and their creepyness. Nice poem |