I honestly can not explain how hard I laughed when they walked in on Clarice and Deon.

That had to be one of the funniest things I've ever read.

or maybe it was just funny to me?

either way the story was amazing.

this story was great keep up the good work and writing.

I love your storie! woo-hoo!

hahahha. they were caught!

no more Vincent or Celia! no. :'(

Vincent is a lot smarter than Deon, he locked the door and made it sound proof.

TO THE THIRD BOOK!

“The ancient has spoken!” Samoda said dramatically with a cheerful laugh. hahahaha it reminds me of survivor, "the tribe has spoken"

haha. umm how did Deon know that Mike was going to do that? other than reading his mind.

oh hell no. Celia? are you really gone? please come back...

:(

yay! i KNEW it. i knew it i knew it i. knew. it!

well i totally had the idea of Clarice being Deon's soulmate. ahh i love mates, & mythical creatures & their soulmates.

WHAT THE FUCK! WHY DID YOU KILL VINCE! AND CELIA AND ALL OF THE GOOD GUYS! IDK HOW BUT YOU HAVE TO BRING THEM BACK, YOU HAVE TO! PLEASE MAYBE THE SEQUEL WILL BRING THEM BACK CAUSE SERIOUSLY YOU JUST CANT END A STORY LIKE THIS!

HEY BABY GURL! holy shit that was excellent i loved it. i literally laughed out loud for a minute when Clarice and Deon got caught hahahhaha that was excellent. yes story is very good. i also see that your typing up the Sacred Demoness. Is that fnished? and have i read the whole thing? well keep up your wonderful thrilling and exciting writing skills love. good work.

luv jordy x

I don't know if I have ever reviewed this or The Secret but just had to review this one. I was not expecting this story to end with this chapter. It really caught me off gaurd. I feel like there is still more to be done with Deon and Clarice. I think you should right another one and continue there story because I don't quite feel it is done yet.

oh...my...gosh!

uwa...::sob::

It was good (even if you killed off good people), thanks for finishing it. I especially liked the end when everyone burst in on Deon and Clarice doing the horizontal. O_o hahaha, oh so funny.

Hey i love this story please write another sequel to this one I would love to know what is going to happen with Deon and Clarice and the rest of the crew. Please write another one please i would love to read some more stories.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE

Haha that ending rocked!

I love the story so far! I really do :D

Poor Volante HAHA XD

I loved the ending(im not a perv) but did clarice end up losing her virginity?